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Old 10-28-2007, 06:35 PM   #1
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Can someone please help change this sentence?
"As I look into the mirror, I see someone who will help thousands of children through a strong undergraduate education in Neuroscience, which would lead to medical school, culminating in a medical degree."

I can't figure out how to say that after getting a strong undegraduate education in Neuroscience, I would go to medical school ending with a MD.

Thanks for your help.
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Old 10-28-2007, 06:39 PM   #2
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"As I look in the mirror, I see someone who will major in neuroscience, attend medical school and help thousands of children through the practice of medicine."

Keep your sentences simple.
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Old 10-28-2007, 06:49 PM   #3
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Awesome!

Thanks a lot Chedva!
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