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Old 11-02-2007, 07:49 PM   #1
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I need revision on my first UC #1 Essay!!

It's my rough rough draft and short (379 words)

I am a terrible writer.. I think I have problems with grammer and the content.

Can anyone help me with my essay please??

The prompt is:

Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
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Old 11-04-2007, 12:42 PM   #2
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go ahead and send it. sainanduri@gmail.com
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Old 11-04-2007, 04:39 PM   #3
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hey ill read pm me
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Old 11-04-2007, 04:46 PM   #4
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i can have a try if you want
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Old 11-04-2007, 04:49 PM   #5
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i am free to revise.
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Old 11-07-2007, 01:22 AM   #6
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ill take a look. pm me
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