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Old 11-03-2007, 05:18 PM   #1
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Revise my short essay (379 words) PLEASE!

I am a bad writer.. I think I have problems with grammer and the content.

Can anyone help me with my essay please??

The prompt is:

Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
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Old 11-03-2007, 06:48 PM   #2
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If you can get it to me tonight I can look at it quickly; if not, it may take a while. I'd be glad to look at it
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Old 11-03-2007, 07:04 PM   #3
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yo this is the UC application essay...
I can help out!
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Old 11-03-2007, 09:34 PM   #4
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I can look at it!
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Old 11-04-2007, 08:23 AM   #5
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send it over
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