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Old 11-05-2007, 10:23 PM   #1
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UC #1 Personal Statement
I got back my personal statement from my English teacher and he said it was one of the few "on track." Yet, it needs some grammer revision and more insight. Will anyone be willing to peer edit it and give it a glance? It would be much appreciated.
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Old 11-06-2007, 02:39 AM   #2
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i'll take a look for you
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Old 11-07-2007, 02:17 AM   #3
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ill take a look. pm me
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Old 11-09-2007, 06:50 PM   #4
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i'll take a look, pm it over.
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Old 11-10-2007, 10:52 AM   #5
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ill take a look. pm me
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Old 11-10-2007, 10:57 AM   #6
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i'll take a look
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Old 11-10-2007, 02:17 PM   #7
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if you still need reading, just pm me
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Old 11-10-2007, 04:23 PM   #8
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I'll read it too if u want
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Old 11-10-2007, 06:11 PM   #9
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Ill give it a go
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Old 11-10-2007, 11:20 PM   #10
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Pm Me 2. Im Willing 2 Read It.
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Old 11-11-2007, 04:10 PM   #11
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PM me and I will take a look at it.
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Old 11-11-2007, 06:04 PM   #12
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I'll read it, but I'm applying to Berkeley this year, so you don't have to send me it if you don't want to.
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