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Old 11-27-2007, 12:12 AM   #1
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My UC Essay #2 feels soooooo cliche and simple. Need serious edits
I finished it in about an hour after taking me 4 days to finally think of something to write about.

But it feels so cliche. I hate it. But I honestly have nothing else to write about.

I would appreciate some serious editing here because I really feel like it needs a lot of work.

If you want to read it, post. I would prefer people who have already finished their essays
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Old 11-27-2007, 03:25 AM   #2
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Let me see it.

I already applied to UC's and commonapp early (so I can't change any essays).

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Old 11-27-2007, 03:17 PM   #3
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I'll read it.
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Old 11-27-2007, 03:43 PM   #4
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Sure I can edit, I'm not applying to any UCs
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Old 11-27-2007, 07:47 PM   #5
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alright sent.

anymore readers? i would really like to get this thing completely done by today/tomorrow!
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Old 11-27-2007, 07:50 PM   #6
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sure PM me
Go for it..
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Old 11-27-2007, 09:39 PM   #7
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sure, if you'd like. I'm not applying to UC's, btw.
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Old 11-27-2007, 11:35 PM   #8
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thanks, sent.

bump.
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Old 11-28-2007, 12:08 AM   #9
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i'll read it too
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Old 11-28-2007, 03:44 PM   #10
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bump. very few people actually responded. plz help guys. i need this done by today =[
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Old 11-28-2007, 03:50 PM   #11
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Send it over. I could do it right now if you want.
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Old 11-28-2007, 06:33 PM   #12
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I'll try to help out if I can
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Old 11-28-2007, 10:56 PM   #13
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PM it over baybayyy

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Old 11-28-2007, 11:56 PM   #14
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