This is the one I applied EA to Stanford with and I'm not sure if I want to use it for RD because of some concerns:
-Structure makes it seem like an English class essay
-I don't focus on one single thing, rather I try to expound 3 of my facets
-it's 800 words
Okay, so anyone who wants someone to read over and critique a college essay and is willing to do the same for me can PM me the essay with "College Essay Trade" in the title. Or if you'd rather get my essay first, post here and I'll PM it to you and you can PM me yours afterward (or you can just read mine

).
Let's see how this works out.