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Old 12-30-2007, 05:04 PM   #1
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The RISKIEST of risky essays for Chicago

So for the last open-ended essay I'm thinking about submitting a satire I wrote

A REAL satire, in the same style and tone as Jonathan Swift's original

I mean I feel that this is the best creative piece I've ever written... it's witty, thoughtful, very focused, and ridicules racism to effect social change on a very prominent issue in society today (illegal immigration)

BUT...

For those of you who have read the Modest Proposal, think of how inflammatory and offensive it was

Well mine equals it in offensiveness, and its ridicule of racism is VERY subtle (enough that a fast read of it will sound like I'm a hardcore racist)

No doubt, though, I'm a sure it's an excellent example of pure satire (where humor is not the primary intent) and have been told so by my English teacher

What do you guys think? I heard chicago is very openminded with its essays, but should I take this chance?
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Old 12-30-2007, 05:08 PM   #2
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Maybe have someone (an intelligent person) who doesn't know about it read it and have them tell you their first impression. If they recognize your satirical tone, then go for it.
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Old 12-30-2007, 05:15 PM   #3
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I have not read it and yet, and would love to give an unbiased look over. ^^
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Old 12-30-2007, 05:21 PM   #4
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Same here actually - I'd like to read it. My email is kdavis90@msn.com
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Old 12-30-2007, 05:33 PM   #5
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keddy i sent it to you, please send your comments by pm

my parents read it and were very adamant against me using it

i have not had much success with this outside my english classroom
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Old 12-30-2007, 05:56 PM   #6
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Include a warning that first appearances can be deceiving.
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Old 12-30-2007, 05:58 PM   #7
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I'll read iit- I was accepted EA to Chicago and love reading those creative essays
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Old 12-30-2007, 06:00 PM   #8
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Yes guys obviously ill have a dislcaimer

But the thing is, even with the disclaimer, im afraid that the adcoms will be too blinded by the downright repulsivness of some parts to see it as part of an integral whole

Anyways, if you want to read it you must provide an email because its too big to pm
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Old 12-30-2007, 06:07 PM   #9
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I'll have a look at it. converseonestar2@aol.com
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Old 12-30-2007, 06:25 PM   #10
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I love satire! Can I have a look? I will let you know if I think it is too risk or not. dauntlessthedrab37@yahoo.com
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Old 12-30-2007, 06:27 PM   #11
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Ooooh! I want to read it, just PM it to me
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Old 12-30-2007, 06:28 PM   #12
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no wait. email - livehott605@aim.com
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Old 12-30-2007, 06:29 PM   #13
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please have at least a 100 posts, i want mature judgments that i can trust
thanks
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Old 12-30-2007, 06:31 PM   #14
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I'll read it, thefantasyfreak@gmail.com
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Old 12-30-2007, 06:45 PM   #15
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sounds awesome....pm it over and ill read it
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