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Old 12-31-2007, 01:46 PM   #1
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critique needed for yale essay

the deadline is less than ten hours away!!
I'm still finishing my essay.. its about my dad.
would anyone be willing to read and critique my essay?
post a reply or just pm me then i'll pm u back w/ the essay.
id really appreciate it.
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Old 12-31-2007, 01:57 PM   #2
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i'll read it! wanna read mine?
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Old 12-31-2007, 03:19 PM   #3
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Pm me. I'll try to help w/ in 5 hours.
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Old 12-31-2007, 03:24 PM   #4
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mine is partly abt my dad too- do you want to interchange- mine isn't turning out nicely and i really need some comments and criticism.
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Old 12-31-2007, 04:01 PM   #5
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Current Yale student-will help

pm me! Happy to help asap
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Old 12-31-2007, 04:11 PM   #6
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Yes yes!

Wanna swap essays? I"m in dire need too (Yale as well)
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Old 12-31-2007, 04:12 PM   #7
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Pm Me Please!!
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Old 12-31-2007, 04:12 PM   #8
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thanks everyone for offer. i'll pm it out as soon as i finish this--hopefully soon!
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Old 12-31-2007, 04:29 PM   #9
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pm me and i'll let you know
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Old 12-31-2007, 04:57 PM   #10
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I'm writing about my dad too! But I'm not applying to Yale... I'll take a look at it if you would like.
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