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Old 12-31-2007, 05:20 PM   #1
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College Essay! Help?
Would anyone like to read my essay, the topic is about becoming a cyborg (sounds weird I know, but it'll make sense when you read it)

would love people's suggestions and grammatical edits etc...

thanks, and if you can do it asap thats great

because its kinda due tonight haha lol...
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Old 12-31-2007, 05:25 PM   #2
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I just recently joined, but I'd be happy to help if you trust me enough. Feel free to PM me.
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Old 12-31-2007, 05:31 PM   #3
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thanks pmed

would love more critques as well
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Old 12-31-2007, 05:35 PM   #4
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ill read too
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Old 12-31-2007, 06:11 PM   #5
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Thanks everyone! would still love more though, every critique helps me learn something new
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Old 12-31-2007, 06:21 PM   #6
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would really like more, almost desperate lol
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Old 12-31-2007, 06:29 PM   #7
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I'd be happy to look at it and send comments.....
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Old 12-31-2007, 06:32 PM   #8
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Okay, I'll bite.
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Old 12-31-2007, 06:51 PM   #9
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bumping it up
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Old 12-31-2007, 07:07 PM   #10
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the more the better
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Old 01-01-2008, 01:13 AM   #11
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I'll read tonight..
I will warn you though, I am quite harsh.
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