General Opinion?

asdfjkl1 · 02-09-2008, 10:50 PM

I submitted my applications before Jan 1. I'm waiting on them. I wrote a deeply personal essay for it. Had family and friends look at it.

I just want general feedback about it. It would be PMed over.

**Please, if you do say you would like to give a general opinion, please get back to me about it within a day or two. Also, please let me reiterate, I do not want this essay seen anywhere else. Read it, but don't share it.**

**Established posters only. I know the difference.**

fizix2 · 02-10-2008, 07:53 PM

i'd be happy to read it.
good luck =)

asdfjkl1 · 02-10-2008, 10:39 PM

Thank you and sent!

skatj · 02-14-2008, 11:33 PM

I'll read it. I consider myself decent at writing but horrible at personal narratives, so I might not be the biggest help but I'll tell you what I think.

Twirlonwater · 02-14-2008, 11:36 PM

I would be happy to read it. I love personal narratives, and have read a lot of them.

asdfjkl1 · 02-19-2008, 05:57 PM

Oh god I can't believe I missed these. Currently on vacay-- but when I come home!

nygirl786 · 03-15-2008, 01:32 AM

I'd be glad to read it and give you any advice I might have to offer.

briangarner · 03-15-2008, 05:54 AM

Send me ! And I will help you through ********* !