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Old 03-11-2008, 08:58 PM   #1
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PLEASE read what I would tell my roommate.

This one is for the Stanford transfer essay. It's about 13 lines... and I have to shorten to about 10 lines. It's quirky too.
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Old 03-11-2008, 09:34 PM   #2
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I wanna read something. Never read other's essays before, but I wanna help.
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Old 03-11-2008, 10:02 PM   #3
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I'll read it for voice. PM me.
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Old 03-14-2008, 05:41 PM   #4
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i'll read it. :]
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Old 03-16-2008, 03:02 PM   #5
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if you need helping shortening your essay, I'll read it.
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Old 03-20-2008, 10:03 PM   #6
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I'll read it.
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Old 03-24-2008, 09:50 PM   #7
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i want to!!! but it is okay if you don't trust me
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Old 03-24-2008, 10:51 PM   #8
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I read it. Pretty good, but you should leave out the part about night terrors. Also, what's with the explicit mother fantasies? Paging Dr. Freud, lol.

Nice work!

- J
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Old 03-26-2008, 11:18 AM   #9
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I read it!
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Old 05-08-2008, 11:33 PM   #10
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Hey, submitted my Stanford app as well and I was wondering how others handled this prompt - it left a lot of room for creativity but I'm not sure I used it all too well.
PM if u still have it.
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