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Old 03-27-2008, 09:12 PM   #1
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Easy Reading

This is my first ever-essay thread so I decided to smart small, this is just my "what my activity means to me essay." I wrote it at two in the morning last night, and thought, hmmm...this isn't terrible. Wanted to know what you guys thought. Be as critical as you deem neccessary.

I would really appreciate any reviews, especially from already college students or parents here! thanks!

I am a junior, so you know.
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Old 03-27-2008, 09:52 PM   #2
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I wrote my essay at 2 AM too. Sent it to all my colleges. I wonder what they thought about it. I wrote about an experience I had that night with my friend and how it made me think back to the time I saved a man's life who had a stroke. I hope they like it.
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Old 03-27-2008, 09:57 PM   #3
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Wow. Mine isn't nearly that dramatic, haha...although I like to think I wrote it dramatically.
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Old 03-27-2008, 11:30 PM   #4
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Sure, email me at RayAllen333@gmail.com with college confidential as subject please. Good luck!
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Old 03-28-2008, 03:41 PM   #5
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thanks! anyone else?
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Old 03-31-2008, 08:02 PM   #6
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the title is A Journey Beyond the Abyss
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Old 04-11-2008, 04:10 PM   #7
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The title sounds pretty sophiscated, I want to take a look.
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Old 04-14-2008, 07:58 PM   #8
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seems like a cool essay.

can i check it out?

email me at kungpao.yangzhao@gmail.com
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Old 04-18-2008, 10:56 AM   #9
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this has been a pretty contoversial essay. Some of you have said its been great and poetic, others have said that it needs to be re-worked or scrapped. Anyone else have any input?

I personally like it...but then again its my essay.
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Old 04-21-2008, 07:03 PM   #10
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sure, sushant269@gmail.com
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Old 05-12-2008, 08:03 PM   #11
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Sure, can you send it to me? I would like a read-through.

Thanks!
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Old 05-13-2008, 06:44 PM   #12
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I'd love to check it out for you. PM me if you like.
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