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Old 06-06-2008, 11:33 PM   #1
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Prelim. essay on slightly sensitive topic

I wrote this in about 30 minutes when, for some reason, I just felt inspired to write It's about my past mental health issues, and I was just wondering if anyone could edit/give me any feedback on it (as in, 'too whiny', 'doesn't say enough about you', 'boring', 'uncomfortable', 'bad topic', etc.)

Any takers?
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Old 06-07-2008, 10:26 AM   #2
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I'll help, PM it to me, if you want.
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Old 06-07-2008, 02:44 PM   #3
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I'll give feedback too
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Old 06-07-2008, 10:14 PM   #4
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Sure, I'll help you out!
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Old 06-08-2008, 10:50 PM   #5
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thanks, all of you. I'll pm it to you today.
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Old 06-08-2008, 11:31 PM   #6
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if you dont mind, pm it to me too.
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Old 06-09-2008, 10:51 PM   #7
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PM it to me, por favor
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Old 06-09-2008, 11:06 PM   #8
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PM it. =]

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Old 06-13-2008, 01:13 PM   #9
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Pm me :3

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Old 06-13-2008, 01:58 PM   #10
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I'll read it.
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Old 06-13-2008, 02:31 PM   #11
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i'll PM it to the rest of you all today. sorry i didn't see these responses earlier! thanks!
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Old 06-13-2008, 07:33 PM   #12
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Old 06-18-2008, 05:17 AM   #13
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pm me pleasee..
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Old 06-19-2008, 10:28 PM   #14
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If you PM it, I will read it
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Old 06-19-2008, 11:53 PM   #15
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I'm also learning about college essays, and am interested in giving feedback (as well as learning from your essay as well).
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