starss

I've been working on my essay for the CommonApp, but I have no idea at all how I'm doing and if it's good or not. Can anyone help me out here? I need someone to read over it and let me know if it addresses the right topics. Any opinions at all are appreciated, actually. I just feel so lost about how to do this. Thank you!

I'll PM the essay to anyone who wants as long as they're '08 or older. Sorry '09ers, I like you guys but not for this situation.

hpg90

Feel free to PM me.

starss

Thanks! Going to PM it to you now.

Anyone else willing to help out?

starss

hmm.. no one else at all? ):

Quicksandslowly

I'll try and critique it for you if you want.

Star*

Sure, I'll help you out

starss

Thanks! I'm going to revise my current one according to what hpg advised me to do, so I'll send you the new one when I'm done with it.

the_hitch_hiker

well, I have waaay too much free time, so if you still need some help, PM me

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Class of '08.