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Prompt #2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or
Experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?]
Throughout my life, my personal statement has been drawing. Therefore, having this special talent is extremely important to me because no one in my family has this talent like I do. Another reason why this talent is important to me is because this talent will help me fulfill my dreams, which is becoming a professional graphic designer. Having this talent makes me feel special because I will be the first individual in my family to pursue a career in graphic design.
This talent makes me proud because I realize that I could draw or paint really well if I put all my effort into it. It also makes me proud because I can benefit from this talent such as using it to design a website for my parents business. I can also use it to teach others. This talent is not just beneficial to me, but others as well. Having this wonderful talent gave me goals to achieve later on in life. It inspire to me to become a graphic designer. Ive always love to draw when I was a little girl. For example, when I was about five years old, I always drew pictures and showing them to my mother. Ever since I was little, I knew that I have a passion for art. My mom used to say that this talent was a god given talent and that rarely any people have this talent like I do. I believed her, this talent is truly a god given talent.
When I was little, I always thought this talent was just a hobby, but ever since I took computer art and beginning art in high school. I knew this was my personal talent and that I truly have passion for. I put my soul, my heart, my passion into art. I am very blessed to have this wonderful talent. This talent gave me hopes of becoming a famous computer artist one day. This talent is everything I wanted. It gave me confidence in myself that I am capable of fulfilling my dreams. It is special and sacred, that will stay with me forever.
I know I have many grammar and verb tense errors, but just read over it and see
what you think of the essay itself.
Give me advice and tips of how to improve my essay as well.