thenplayon

Hey all!

Okay, I wrote my essay, revised it, re-wrote it, gave it to my English teacher (he liked it), and looked at it again. Still, I'm not entirely confident it works. I feel like it needs something else and I can't put my finger on what. I wrote it after an almost month long case of writers block, so something about it feels weird.

Please feel free to cut into it as much as you possibly can. Respond and I'll PM it over.

Please and thank you!

Oh, right. I'm applying at:

Boston University
Northeastern
Emerson College
Ithaca
Quinnipiac
Umass Amherst
Endicott College

static75

where are you applying?

I'll take a look, np

lookbeyond

PM it to me.