iliketodance123

(I'm a junior still) but anyways...
I was thinking about writing my essay about my passion for working with young children and my reasons for it? and also include the experience i have workng with children(day camp, tutoring, kumon, etc)
I want to major in childhood education.
Do you think that this is a good topic for my essay?
any suggestions on how to take a more interesting approach to writing an essay on this topic?
thank you!

ADad

Sure, that sounds reasonable.

Don't use the essay to give a lot of details about your job experience. Your readers can find that elsewhere in your application.

Use the essay to reveal you. Be personal, detailed, honest, revealing.

Here's some good advice about writing college essays:

Essays, Admission Information, Undergraduate Admission, U.Va.

And show, don't tell:

Show, don't tell