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Old 07-03-2009, 01:22 PM   #1
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Finished my 1st draft of my college essay, would like some critique
Just finished my 1st draft. Its a bit long, tops out at a little over 800 words.
My essay is, in my opinion, pretty raw and I would appreciate it if anyone could read it and give their opinions on my topic, and the paper in general.
Be as honest and ruthless in your opinions as you want.

Just ask and I will PM it to you

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Old 07-03-2009, 02:01 PM   #2
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I'll read it.
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ill read it as well
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Old 07-03-2009, 02:37 PM   #4
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I'll read.
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Old 07-03-2009, 05:48 PM   #5
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Pm it over!!!
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Old 07-03-2009, 05:51 PM   #6
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PM me and I'll give it a read!
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Old 07-03-2009, 06:29 PM   #7
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pm me it. 10char
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Old 07-03-2009, 06:34 PM   #8
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I'd love to see it. PM ME.
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Old 07-03-2009, 06:50 PM   #9
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i'd be HAPPY to help you ! =]
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Old 07-03-2009, 07:58 PM   #10
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i'll read it!
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Old 07-03-2009, 09:31 PM   #11
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Old 07-04-2009, 01:09 PM   #12
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pm it .i will read it!
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Old 07-04-2009, 06:41 PM   #13
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Old 07-04-2009, 07:43 PM   #14
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I'll go for it.
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I'll read it, PM me.
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