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Old 07-03-2009, 10:21 PM   #1
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OMG I GOT A B+! IT'S TOTALLY UNFAIR! I wrote my essay about it, look please?
I wrote my essay about a B+ I got, can someone please read and critique it? Thanks!
p.s. Please don't be fooled by the title; its whining tone belies the optimistic attitude of my actual essay.
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Old 07-03-2009, 10:24 PM   #2
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troll?

(10 char)
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Old 07-03-2009, 10:37 PM   #3
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No, I'm not a troll, this really is what my essay is about. Care to read?
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Old 07-03-2009, 10:39 PM   #4
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Sure, PM me.
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Old 07-03-2009, 10:43 PM   #5
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I'll read. PM me.
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Old 07-03-2009, 10:58 PM   #6
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I'll read too. PM.
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Old 07-04-2009, 12:49 AM   #7
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Send it over.
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Old 07-04-2009, 01:05 AM   #8
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Old 07-04-2009, 11:30 AM   #9
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pm it to me.
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Old 07-04-2009, 11:34 AM   #10
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also, how strict are colleges about the 500 world limit?
Mine's slightly under 600.
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depends on the college. just try to really make that 500word limit within a few words.
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Old 07-04-2009, 12:09 PM   #12
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so anyone with feedback?
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Old 07-04-2009, 12:30 PM   #13
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I'll read it!
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Old 07-04-2009, 12:31 PM   #14
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Eh, I dunno. It came off a tad arrogant.
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Old 07-04-2009, 12:38 PM   #15
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thanks, have any suggestions?
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