YALE essay

shuaishuaishuai · 08-31-2009, 09:45 PM

who wants to read it and give me feedbacks? I want to know if there's a direction i should exploit a little more in my essay.
(no essay thiefs allowed =)

smarts1 · 08-31-2009, 10:09 PM

PM it over!

kenhivus · 08-31-2009, 10:15 PM

I can proofread it for you, just shoot it to me via PM

FURKANK · 08-31-2009, 10:16 PM

i would be glad to read since i'm not applying to yale : )

mnt328 · 08-31-2009, 10:42 PM

I'd love to read it - i've already finished my big essay so no worries about stealing!

kashoku · 09-01-2009, 12:27 AM

glad to proofread - pm over.

wheatbread · 09-01-2009, 02:47 AM

not applying to yale either. i'll proofread it! pm !

truestudent · 09-01-2009, 10:02 AM

Sure, PM me, I"ll give feedback.

imN3ilhuru · 09-01-2009, 11:49 AM

pm it over.

Duke99 · 09-01-2009, 11:52 AM

PM
will have a look and comment on it (don't be sorry if i am harsh though)

lindha · 09-01-2009, 01:19 PM

pm it over

shuaishuaishuai · 09-01-2009, 03:34 PM

ok, not trying to be mean here but can you only apply if you are already in a good university or if you are applying to like Yale caliber schools. I'm not going to send my essay to someone who's applying to state schools or someone whose post history is full of "PM me, PM ms, PM me"

=)

solittletime · 09-01-2009, 04:04 PM

sure
i'm yale scea, r u?

my very recent history (all yesterday actually lol) has a lot of essay reading cuz i juuust finished mine but, and ahem, its twice as long as the word limit (aiming for no longer than 650), wanted to see how other approached it? but if u look later on like almost all of my posts are the 2014 scea yale threads lol

the_pakalypse · 09-01-2009, 06:42 PM

hey ill look over it if u want

ichiruki · 09-01-2009, 06:57 PM

if you want to, feel free to PM