emma!

Anyone want to critique and offer advice? My essay is about an ethical dilemma i've faced for my entire life (oooh anyone interested yet?) and how it has impacted me as a person.
The ending isn't entirely developed but I want to make sure I'm headed in the right direction before I finish it all up.

Thanks and PM me to read it!


P.S. Doesn't matter what year you are because it includes details that no one could lie about...It's definitely very unique situation...

EdenW

sounds interesting, I'd take a stab at critiquing it for you! pm it on over!

lachata

i'm so critical....you woudn't want me to revise it.....but if you wanna try.....give it here pm it

bjvise

^^ is right! It does sound interesting. Mind if I give it a read?

bergyice

I wanna help if you wish~~

WakeUp

I'll read it. I know what I'm talking about! PM me.

blueviolet

I'd be glad to read it; PM it over

S2madingS2

You can PM it to me although I have to tell you I've seen a lot of unethical things in my life. People around me have stolen so much to make ends meet. I guess I could give a bias and more diversity in case your adcom had a rough life.