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Old 09-13-2009, 01:20 AM   #1
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My finished masterpiece for Brown!! very Unique
I think it is THE essay I've been trying for. Of course it is a first draft, so any corrections or help with transitioning towards the last couple paragraphs would be a HUGE help. It is eccentric and different. NO ONE ELSE has EVER written on this topic. Therefore, I am not afraid of anyone taking.

I WILL PM IT TO YOU.
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Old 09-13-2009, 01:23 AM   #2
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I'll read it Pm me
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:08 AM   #3
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Sure, I'd love to help you out. I'm pretty harsh, so you're in good hands.
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Old 09-13-2009, 04:24 AM   #4
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I can read it
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Old 09-13-2009, 10:33 AM   #5
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thank you guys, thank you so far.
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Old 09-13-2009, 10:43 AM   #6
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Heya, I'll take a look at it also!
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Old 09-13-2009, 11:40 AM   #7
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-anyone else?- I am desperate for feedback. Ive already Pmed about 11 people with no response!
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I'll read it and get back to you ASAP.
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Old 09-13-2009, 01:16 PM   #9
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I'm '14, so if you don't have a problem with that I'll be happy to give you feedback!
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Old 09-13-2009, 01:26 PM   #10
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PM me. I would be worried about some of the above posters trolling for essays. Check their post histories. Feel free to check mine: I'm legit.
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Old 09-13-2009, 01:30 PM   #11
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I'm '14 BTW...I'm not applying to Brown or any college of that caliber, and I actually just wrote my essay and am looking for people to read it.

Just thought I'd clear my name.
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:26 PM   #12
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I'll read it. PM me.
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:29 PM   #13
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I'd be more than HAPPY to help you PM me
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:31 PM   #14
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I'm a '14er, but I'm not applying to Brown (applying to UCB, Stanford, Princeton, Cornell, maybe MIT), so if you have no issues with me reading it then send it over! I'll provide some feedback.
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:53 PM   #15
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Will you please PM it to me? Im a 2014er, but im not applying to brown
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