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Old 09-13-2009, 02:02 AM   #1
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Essay Intro NEED CRITIQUE!! quick read
I want to know if it's worth keeping or throwing out. It's only a paragraph so far so it'll only take a minute to read. thanks to anyone who can help me!
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:08 AM   #2
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quick bump
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:17 AM   #3
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please? ='(
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if this bump fails, well, i think i'll leave this alone
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:48 AM   #5
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Don't be so hasty! These things take longer than 50 mins! pm it over, ill help you out.
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Old 09-13-2009, 04:57 AM   #6
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any more takers?
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