| critique my not so brilliant essay?
i thought this was the best piece of work everrr when i first wrote it a few weeks ago. now looking back ... it seems pretty ordinary :/ I'd love some people to take a look at it and tell me what they honestly think!
some things: no 2010ers, PLEASE. please already be in college, where doesn't really matter, but I'd really prefer no high schoolers. and i'll proobably only send it if you have a decent number of posts.
thanks in advance!!!!
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