I'd appreciate some help on this essay.

ChasingStarlight · 09-19-2009, 12:32 AM

Would any non 2014-er look over this?
My english teacher picked this over my old topic and said this was way more unique, but I'm not quite sure if its appropriate for the common app personal statement.

Thanks in advance!

bjvise · 09-19-2009, 04:07 AM

I am a '14er so if you're worried about me stealing your essay, then send the two topics and I'll tell you which one I think would work better.

S2madingS2 · 09-19-2009, 08:22 AM

I'm not a 2014'er, you can PM me the essays with the topics

ChasingStarlight · 09-19-2009, 03:08 PM

I can put the topics right here, but I don't think you can see much from that :/

1. My weekly trips to open mic night at our local coffee shop.
2. The end of the world.