Samdish

Hi it's my second draft, and I need lots of reviews, so tell me you'll do it, n i'll PM it to you. thanks.

also, please tell me who you are in short ...

Samdish

and i'll be glad to rate yours in return

limabeans

Sam...just make sure your essay is about you (how you felt/how you reacted to it/what you put into it/what you got out...), not the experience itself! Adcoms aren't interesting in reading about an interesting experience, they want to know about you, through this experience.

Samdish

hey thanks for the reply..yes there's a lot of self-evaluation etc in the essay too..would you mind critiquing it?

Mr. A

I know I haven't read the essay but just a tip. Talk about the experience, but also talk about how has effected how you think and how it has changed you.

Samdish

thanks mr A

smarts1

PM it over! I'm not applying to any of the top schools...

Samdish

bump!!!!!!!!!

Skylarkin

Hey, I'll be willing to read it.

Samdish

thanks skylarkin!

Samdish

anyone else please ????

Powa2

I'll will read yours, I sent mine off to Columbia already >.>

Samdish

@powa2 thanks!

anyone else please?

Maxie91

Hi - I'd be happy to take a look and send you some comments.

Brief sum about me: I graduated from an IB school in London this May and I am on a gap year interning at a hospital in Texas.

Samdish

thanks maxie91...

any other takers!???