wasian_girl

The prompt is any topic of your choice. I decided to write my essay on sketching (one of my extracurriculars is art) and how observing their mannerism helps draw their physical form. My mom is Asian so her English sucks, and my younger sister won't bother to read it. I'm only asking for quick feedback! Thanks so much

If you provide your email, I'll send you the first 500 words. I'm still re-working the conclusion. Just need to know if I should scrap the essay or keep it.

ariana2010

I'd be happy to read it if you still need help My email is avitarelli@msn.com. Do you mind checking out a post I made? I'm just looking for some general feedback on my chances of getting admitted into certain schools.

http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/...-into-unc.html

Cacciato

I'll read yours if u can read my common app essay. PM me

iwannagotoBC

Feel free to PM me.

As you can tell, I am only interested in BC.

bjjones

if you read mine...