Penn Pg. 217 Essay--Should I add mine?

Hopeful_Underdog · 11-01-2009, 04:05 PM

Hey everyone,

I wrote a page 217 essay for Penn, but it's a little bland in my opinion. Would anyone be willing to look at it for me? I'd love a critique but even if you can just say, "yeah, I'd add it", or "no, leave it at home", I'd really appreciate just some honest opinions.

Let me know if your up for it! I need readers today, though. I'm applying ED.

bryceeferguson · 11-01-2009, 04:30 PM

I'll read it for you!

Hopeful_Underdog · 11-01-2009, 04:48 PM

Anyone else? I'd really appreciate it. You don't even have to take the time to write out long comments. Just a simple yes or no is good enough for me!

Cacciato · 11-01-2009, 05:04 PM

eh sure I read your other stuff and they were pretty creative so I'd love to read this

Hopeful_Underdog · 11-01-2009, 05:06 PM

Thanks!! I'm going to PM it to you now.

MiRAGEx21 · 11-03-2009, 01:59 PM

hey i'd love to read it!

Hopeful_Underdog · 11-03-2009, 06:12 PM

I already submitted it because the deadline was November 1st, but thanks for the offer!