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Old 11-02-2009, 06:57 PM   #1
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An essay that will touch the bottom of your heart. See if you agree...
My English teacher has done most of the grammar and hard work, so all there is left is:

-pick out any more mistakes(shouldn't be many)
-see if there is anything unclear or not making sense
-give me comments on it, such as how strong this essay is, how much will the college like it, does it answer the prompt, or is it cliche or unique

It is for UCs, so the prompts are:

Essay # 1: Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

Essay # 2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?
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Old 11-02-2009, 08:55 PM   #2
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hehe I'll read it
PM me
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Old 11-02-2009, 09:22 PM   #3
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I'll read it if we can trade. You give me feedback on mine as well, and it's supposed to be touching in a sense too.
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Old 11-02-2009, 09:24 PM   #4
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I'm a parent and will take a look if you PM it to me.
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Old 11-02-2009, 10:15 PM   #5
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i'll read yours if you read mine

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Old 11-03-2009, 12:04 AM   #6
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I am willing to read, just PM your essays over.
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Old 11-05-2009, 10:30 PM   #7
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i'll read it too pm me
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Old 11-05-2009, 11:10 PM   #8
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I am happy to read it and give feedback.
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Old 11-06-2009, 12:15 AM   #9
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What? did I just told myself to PM my essay over? that was funny...
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Old 11-06-2009, 12:19 AM   #10
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^bahaha, well you have to keep your promises.

I'll crit if you like!
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Old 11-07-2009, 05:34 PM   #11
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I have a 'wooden heart' and let see your words, pm me pls
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Old 11-07-2009, 05:37 PM   #12
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I'll try to help you out if you'd like. PM me
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Old 11-08-2009, 01:54 AM   #13
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I will be more than glad to take a look and critique it, just PM me.
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Old 11-08-2009, 06:08 AM   #14
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add me in too, I'll give you critical feedback =)
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Old 11-08-2009, 03:23 PM   #15
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PM the essay over, and I'll give you some feedback.
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