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i've been working on my common app essay for cornell and have been getting it checked here and there...i recently got comments on maybe adding specific examples to each point i make. that sounds like a good idea, but at the same time i feel like i'd be writing a formal english/lit paper rather than an admissions essay. plus, i feel like adding examples might be "beating around the bush" and i might lose the point im making in the essay.
any feedback or thoughts on this?
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