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Old 03-14-2011, 09:46 AM   #1501
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^^^ very true.
still freakozoid, i have no doubt you will end up somewhere amazing! and i'm not just saying that to be nice. i truly mean it.

speedyz: my caliber? haha, that's rich. the only thing in my application that's above average is my SAT score. in every other aspect, i simply suck.
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:48 AM   #1502
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Pakipower, with all due respect, I hope that you stay out of this. Seems like sahiscope doesn't have a problem and a little bit of goofy humour never hurt anyone.
If it's really pinching you, I suggest you cover that bit of your screen with your hand.
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:49 AM   #1503
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ok pakipower your choice ....
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:50 AM   #1504
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why is it that every other guy has some kind of problem with pakipower.
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:51 AM   #1505
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incarcerated, ok. thanks for clarifying.

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why is it that every other guy has some kind of problem with pakipower.
story of my life.

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Old 03-14-2011, 09:54 AM   #1506
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No intention to sound rude. Apologies if I did.
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:54 AM   #1507
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chalo bhai bhai dosti karlo.
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:55 AM   #1508
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incarcerated, it's perfectly fine.
i misunderstood your posts. if anything, i should be the one to apologize.
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:55 AM   #1509
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Essay Exchange (Comprehensive)

Speedyz - Sahiscope
Exchanged Sahiscope: yes
Exchanged Speedyz: yes
Evaluation Speedyz (by Sahiscope): 7/10
Evaluation Sahiscope (by Speedyz): 8/10
Your story is exceptional and shines through your essay. length was an issue, otherwise it was very good.

qwerty - SpEeDyZ
Exchanged qwerty: yes
Exchanged SpEeDyZ: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by SpEeDyZ): 7/10
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by qwerty): 6.5/10
low rating due to length issue. great work though.

qwerty - SpEeDyZ
Exchanged qwerty: yes
Exchanged SpEeDyZ: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by SpEeDyZ): 7/10
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by qwerty): x/10
Its not a bad essay not at all but it wasn't that great either so a 7ish rating...
good luck!

qwerty - Sahiscope
Exchanged Sahiscope: yes
Exchanged Speedyz: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by Sahiscope): 6/10
Evaluation Sahiscope (by qwerty): 7.5/10
No Further Comments in this exchange.*

freakozoid-SpEeDyZ
Exchanged freakozoid: Yes
Exchanges SpEeDyZ: Yes
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by freakozoid): 7.5/10
Evaluation freakozoid (by SpEeDyZ): 9-9.5/10
It was good content wise but too long
wow! one of the best essays I have read ... coupled with your academic stats dude you are one heck of a strong applicant...


sahiscope - freakozoid
Exchanged sahiscope: yes
Exchanged freakozoid: yes
Evaluation sahiscope (by freakozoid): 8/10
Evaluation freakozoid (by sahiscope): 8.5/10
I like how you've structured the essay. Plus the choice of words was bang on. The essay definitely works. At some places you sounded a little like 'boasting'. If it wasn't for it, it was definitely 9.
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:55 AM   #1510
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I am not expecting anything out of college decisions! As freakozoid put it 'jo Allah ki marzi...'
and oh before 1st april, I dont want anyone to read my essays and evaluate them haha so I am not in for the essay...
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Old 03-14-2011, 09:56 AM   #1511
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Good to see that things are all cool. Pakipower, if it wouldn't be an invasion of your essay-like privacy, which school are you from?
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Old 03-14-2011, 10:00 AM   #1512
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Made it look a bit more 'Official' for you guys. :)

Essay Exchange (Comprehensive)

Speedyz - Sahiscope
Exchanged Sahiscope: yes
Exchanged Speedyz: yes
Evaluation Speedyz (by Sahiscope): 7/10
Evaluation Sahiscope (by Speedyz): 8/10
Your story is exceptional and shines through your essay. length was an issue, otherwise it was very good.

qwerty - SpEeDyZ
Exchanged qwerty: yes
Exchanged SpEeDyZ: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by SpEeDyZ): 7/10
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by qwerty): 6.5/10
low rating due to length issue. great work though.

qwerty - SpEeDyZ
Exchanged qwerty: yes
Exchanged SpEeDyZ: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by SpEeDyZ): 7/10
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by qwerty): x/10
Its not a bad essay not at all but it wasn't that great either so a 7ish rating...
good luck!


qwerty - Sahiscope
Exchanged Sahiscope: yes
Exchanged Speedyz: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by Sahiscope): 6/10
Evaluation Sahiscope (by qwerty): 7.5/10
No Further Comments in this exchange.*

freakozoid-SpEeDyZ
Exchanged freakozoid: Yes
Exchanges SpEeDyZ: Yes
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by freakozoid): 7.5/10
Evaluation freakozoid (by SpEeDyZ): 9-9.5/10

+It was good content wise but too long

+wow! one of the best essays I have read ... coupled with your academic stats dude you are one heck of a strong applicant...


sahiscope - freakozoid
Exchanged sahiscope: yes
Exchanged freakozoid: yes
Evaluation sahiscope (by freakozoid): 8/10
Evaluation freakozoid (by sahiscope): 8.5/10
I like how you've structured the essay. Plus the choice of words was bang on. The essay definitely works. At some places you sounded a little like 'boasting'. If it wasn't for it, it was definitely 9.
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Old 03-14-2011, 10:01 AM   #1513
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Hey!!! No one shouted "1500"!! :/
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Old 03-14-2011, 10:03 AM   #1514
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Good to see that things are all cool. Pakipower, if it wouldn't be an invasion of your essay-like privacy, which school are you from?
can't you tell?

omair, i would've. but, sadly, i didn't get it.
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Old 03-14-2011, 10:05 AM   #1515
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LOL.
Beaconhouse Defence Lahore.

Man up. Spill.
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