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03-14-2011, 09:46 AM
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#1501 | | Member
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^^^ very true.
still freakozoid, i have no doubt you will end up somewhere amazing! and i'm not just saying that to be nice. i truly mean it.
speedyz: my caliber? haha, that's rich. the only thing in my application that's above average is my SAT score. in every other aspect, i simply suck. |
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03-14-2011, 09:48 AM
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#1502 | | Junior Member
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Pakipower, with all due respect, I hope that you stay out of this. Seems like sahiscope doesn't have a problem and a little bit of goofy humour never hurt anyone.
If it's really pinching you, I suggest you cover that bit of your screen with your hand.
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03-14-2011, 09:49 AM
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#1503 | | Member
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ok pakipower  your choice ....
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03-14-2011, 09:50 AM
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#1504 | | Member
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why is it that every other guy has some kind of problem with pakipower.
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03-14-2011, 09:51 AM
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#1505 | | Member
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incarcerated, ok. thanks for clarifying. Quote: |
why is it that every other guy has some kind of problem with pakipower.
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03-14-2011, 09:54 AM
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#1506 | | Junior Member
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No intention to sound rude. Apologies if I did.
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03-14-2011, 09:54 AM
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#1507 | | Junior Member
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chalo bhai bhai dosti karlo.
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03-14-2011, 09:55 AM
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#1508 | | Member
Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Karachi -> University of Michigan '15
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incarcerated, it's perfectly fine. 
i misunderstood your posts. if anything, i should be the one to apologize.
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03-14-2011, 09:55 AM
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#1509 | | Junior Member
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Essay Exchange (Comprehensive)
Speedyz - Sahiscope
Exchanged Sahiscope: yes
Exchanged Speedyz: yes
Evaluation Speedyz (by Sahiscope): 7/10
Evaluation Sahiscope (by Speedyz): 8/10
Your story is exceptional and shines through your essay. length was an issue, otherwise it was very good.
qwerty - SpEeDyZ
Exchanged qwerty: yes
Exchanged SpEeDyZ: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by SpEeDyZ): 7/10
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by qwerty): 6.5/10
low rating due to length issue. great work though.
qwerty - SpEeDyZ
Exchanged qwerty: yes
Exchanged SpEeDyZ: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by SpEeDyZ): 7/10
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by qwerty): x/10
Its not a bad essay not at all but it wasn't that great either so a 7ish rating...
good luck!
qwerty - Sahiscope
Exchanged Sahiscope: yes
Exchanged Speedyz: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by Sahiscope): 6/10
Evaluation Sahiscope (by qwerty): 7.5/10
No Further Comments in this exchange.*
freakozoid-SpEeDyZ
Exchanged freakozoid: Yes
Exchanges SpEeDyZ: Yes
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by freakozoid): 7.5/10
Evaluation freakozoid (by SpEeDyZ): 9-9.5/10
It was good content wise but too long
wow! one of the best essays I have read ... coupled with your academic stats dude you are one heck of a strong applicant...
sahiscope - freakozoid
Exchanged sahiscope: yes
Exchanged freakozoid: yes
Evaluation sahiscope (by freakozoid): 8/10
Evaluation freakozoid (by sahiscope): 8.5/10
I like how you've structured the essay. Plus the choice of words was bang on. The essay definitely works. At some places you sounded a little like 'boasting'. If it wasn't for it, it was definitely 9.
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03-14-2011, 09:55 AM
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#1510 | | Junior Member
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I am not expecting anything out of college decisions! As freakozoid put it 'jo Allah ki marzi...'
and oh before 1st april, I dont want anyone to read my essays and evaluate them haha  so I am not in for the essay...
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03-14-2011, 09:56 AM
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#1511 | | Junior Member
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Good to see that things are all cool. Pakipower, if it wouldn't be an invasion of your essay-like privacy, which school are you from?
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03-14-2011, 10:00 AM
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#1512 | | Member
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Posts: 561
| Made it look a bit more 'Official' for you guys. :) Essay Exchange (Comprehensive) Speedyz - Sahiscope
Exchanged Sahiscope: yes
Exchanged Speedyz: yes
Evaluation Speedyz (by Sahiscope): 7/10
Evaluation Sahiscope (by Speedyz): 8/10 Your story is exceptional and shines through your essay. length was an issue, otherwise it was very good. qwerty - SpEeDyZ
Exchanged qwerty: yes
Exchanged SpEeDyZ: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by SpEeDyZ): 7/10
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by qwerty): 6.5/10 low rating due to length issue. great work though. qwerty - SpEeDyZ
Exchanged qwerty: yes
Exchanged SpEeDyZ: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by SpEeDyZ): 7/10
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by qwerty): x/10 Its not a bad essay not at all but it wasn't that great either so a 7ish rating...
good luck! qwerty - Sahiscope
Exchanged Sahiscope: yes
Exchanged Speedyz: yes
Evaluation qwerty (by Sahiscope): 6/10
Evaluation Sahiscope (by qwerty): 7.5/10 No Further Comments in this exchange.* freakozoid-SpEeDyZ
Exchanged freakozoid: Yes
Exchanges SpEeDyZ: Yes
Evaluation SpEeDyZ (by freakozoid): 7.5/10
Evaluation freakozoid (by SpEeDyZ): 9-9.5/10 +It was good content wise but too long
+wow! one of the best essays I have read ... coupled with your academic stats dude you are one heck of a strong applicant... sahiscope - freakozoid
Exchanged sahiscope: yes
Exchanged freakozoid: yes
Evaluation sahiscope (by freakozoid): 8/10
Evaluation freakozoid (by sahiscope): 8.5/10 I like how you've structured the essay. Plus the choice of words was bang on. The essay definitely works. At some places you sounded a little like 'boasting'. If it wasn't for it, it was definitely 9. |
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03-14-2011, 10:01 AM
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#1513 | | Junior Member
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Hey!!! No one shouted "1500"!! :/
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03-14-2011, 10:03 AM
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#1514 | | Member
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Good to see that things are all cool. Pakipower, if it wouldn't be an invasion of your essay-like privacy, which school are you from?
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omair, i would've. but, sadly, i didn't get it.
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03-14-2011, 10:05 AM
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#1515 | | Junior Member
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LOL.
Beaconhouse Defence Lahore.
Man up. Spill.
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