hookem168

Would any of you like to read my essay in response to Option 1 of the Princeton Supplement ("someone who has influenced you")??

I could use loads of constructive criticism!

Thanks in advance!

EnglishTeacher88

yours must show who/what you are
yours must be well organised.
your inspiration must be meaningfull and have a greater impact on you.
yours must be coherent and inherent bothways;

hookem168

I believe it succeeds on all accounts (to a certain degree!)

But it's a first draft, so I still need advice. Are you up for it?

hookem168

buuuuuump?

st. aegis

sure.pm me