albbymur

Guys please grade my essay (but only if you truly can predict the score accurately)

reality shows essay

I disuccsed the positive aspects of reality shows:

1. American Idol- I said that it inspires the average person to follow his or her dreams. I said that they see other people fulfil ltheir dreams; so if other people can do it hey can too.

2. Obese Camp- this show I said gives people the motivation they may have been looknin for to lose weight. The show demonstrates that exremelty obese peopel can lose weight; and therefore so can the viewer.

My introduction and conclusion were pretty solid. And I used plenty of SAT words..

Thanks!