Hi Kowloon,
First, I think you're referring to question #7, not #8, which was the subject of the previous posts. But to answer your question about #7: I think you're getting confused about what personal voice means. The personal voice only refers to writing in which the author directly references himself or herself in the first person, such as "_I_ felt..." or "It was interesting to _me_..." The first passage does not use personal voice. (FYI, it's not considered the author's personal voice is the author uses "I", "me", etc. when speaking as a character)
Literary allusion is "an explicit or implicit reference to another literary text that is "sufficiently overt" to be recognized and understood by competent readers". I don't see any reference to another literary text in the 2nd passage, but hey, maybe I'm not a "competent reader"

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Hope that helps.