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Old 10-30-2011, 05:19 PM   #1
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"Why Penn?" essay length

Hey guys.
My Why Penn essay is 740 words, but I managed to squeeze it all onto one page.
Do you think this is okay?
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Old 10-30-2011, 05:32 PM   #2
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Umm...that's way too long I believe.
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Old 10-30-2011, 05:52 PM   #3
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No. The requirement is 500 words, approx 1 page. That means, it should be around 500 words AND fit on one page (some kids want to double space, which doesn't work either). You need to cut back...I'd say be between 500-520, MAX, and all on one page.
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Old 10-30-2011, 08:06 PM   #4
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So should it be single spaced, then?

My essay is a solid 485 words so it's 2 pages double spaced. Single-spaced it's a page, but I'm afraid that it'll be rough on the eyes if it's single spaced.

What do you think I should do- singe or double space it?
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Old 10-30-2011, 08:08 PM   #5
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No need to worry about spacing - words that count

PENN does not care if you single or double space the essays. You should stick to 550 words at a max no matter how many spaces or lines it takes.
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Old 10-30-2011, 08:11 PM   #6
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You can also 1.5 space it, if that helps.
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Old 10-30-2011, 08:29 PM   #7
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550 words is a good limit. Anything more than that and the essay gets boring.
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Old 10-30-2011, 09:54 PM   #8
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@konradpawlak: I think I did 1.15 spacing with 12 pts. space in-between paragraphs. It fit comfortable on one page (I had roughly 516 words) with nice spacing in between. I'd recommend keeping it to 1 page as it says "approximately 500 words, 1 page"
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Old 12-11-2011, 06:08 PM   #9
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Don't worry about word limits. Mine was 720-ish and my friend's was even longer but we both got in. Just give them a good essay.
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Old 12-14-2011, 09:57 PM   #10
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agreed. if people read this..
mine was probably around 700 and it was fine
plus if you write a really great essay i'm sure they'll enjoy reading it instead of counting words
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Old 12-15-2011, 02:45 AM   #11
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Yeah, don't worry too much about the word count. Just try not to have unnecessary words/phrases/sentences and try and be as concise as possible. If you go over the limit, but each sentence really adds to the essay and gives the adcom a really good idea of what type of person you are, then it really doesn't matter.
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Old 12-21-2011, 09:19 PM   #12
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Just another question about essays...
Does Penn appreciate creative responses to the "Why Penn" prompt? I have a relatively straightforward essay but I formatted it differently to spice it up. Am I better off just leaving it plain? What about the optional personal essay?
I guess I'm just kinda worried that my essay won't stand out enough... I feel like it comes off as genuine but not mind-blowing...
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Old 12-21-2011, 10:07 PM   #13
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My best advice is to make everything on your application best represent who you are. If you are someone who writes plainly and candidly, I would write your essays that way (but not boring). If you are extremely creative, then write all your essays that way. Don't mold yourself to suit the admissions game. Be yourself because that's the person your best at being.
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Old 12-21-2011, 10:15 PM   #14
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I tend to be a bit too creative sometimes. I look at things in an artistic way while other people just see it as disorganized. I guess I'd rather be safe. I'll try to make my personal essay more creative in writing style to bring that part out then. Thank you for the advice!
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Old 12-21-2011, 10:32 PM   #15
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My Why Penn was "creative" just because I felt like I touched on things most people don't (I'm applying to Wharton, yet business wasn't the focus per se). If you do achieve something from a creative organization, go ahead. A college essay I wrote was pretty straightforward -- the failures I had in my business. Instead of going chronologically though, I was chaotic. However, I think, by doing so, I wrote an essay that wasn't the typical "failure and what I learned from it" deal, but rather something more unique. If it helps and is genuine, do it.
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