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Old 10-05-2012, 09:41 PM   #1
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Essay Critique
Hello,

I've been working on my essay for about a month now, and it's basically done; however, I want some other opinions/suggestions/etc on it. I'll be applying to Wharton and was really trying to make my personality show throughout this writing. If you're a student I'm willing to critique yours as well.

Also, I'm having some trouble attacking the Penn supplements especially the Huntsman essay. Tips and Ideas would be helpful.

Thanks.
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Old 10-06-2012, 07:31 PM   #2
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PM it over and I can take a look.
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Old 10-06-2012, 07:41 PM   #3
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I can take a look too if youd like?
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Old 10-07-2012, 12:43 AM   #4
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You can pm me and I can critique
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Old 10-07-2012, 01:58 AM   #5
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PM me please
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Old 10-07-2012, 01:57 PM   #6
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PM me ill read.
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Old 10-07-2012, 02:19 PM   #7
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PM me if you like
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Old 10-14-2012, 12:46 AM   #8
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PM if you want some advice imrenj.
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Old 10-22-2012, 05:13 AM   #9
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PM me i can look it over!
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Old 10-22-2012, 05:51 PM   #10
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PM me and I'd be happy to take a look for you!
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Old 10-24-2012, 01:10 PM   #11
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Sent out all the PMs!
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Old 10-27-2012, 04:19 PM   #12
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i can help you out
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