I don't mean any offense, but I would feel better having current college students reading it. Not only because every prospective student must be extremely cautious about sending their essays online, but also because even the best high school writers won't have quite the same insight as those who have done the impossible, written extremely well-received essays, and already got in. Thank you, though, for the offer, and good luck to you as well.
@xrCalico, I am going to have a few teachers read it as well, but I'd like people who
don't know me as well to see if they think my essay gives them a good sense of who I am without knowing me yet, if that makes sense.