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Essay Intro

MapleLeafMapleLeaf Registered User Posts: 197 Junior Member
Is there anyone online right now who would be willing to look at the intro to my essay and my idea for the rest of it and let me know what you think? I'm afraid the intro comes across as strange and I don't want to give off that impression.
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