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Fractured?

SAT128SAT128 Registered User Posts: 598 Member
edited December 2012 in College Admissions
This may be a slightly ridiculous question, but I can't decide if 'fractured' is the appropriate word to use in my "thesis" statement

REMOVED (can't copy my genius)


EDIT: Had an epiphany

Replies to: Fractured?

  • princessroiprincessroi Registered User Posts: 26 New Member
    Only you have the context of the entire essay, but I'd lean towards a word that lends itself more to reconciliation than a more severe "torn" or "fractured." I'm not sure which word to substitute , but something that relays a temporary condition could be more adequate. Regardless, take a deep breath, step back. It's only one word, you'll be ok!!
  • SAT128SAT128 Registered User Posts: 598 Member
    Ok I think in the context of the essay "torn" would be slightly less severe than "fractured". Dude I'm having convulsions over here, the deadline for this essay is hours away. Procrastination >_>
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