Please, if you could help edit or give feedback on my essay, I'd really appreciate it. It is 483 words and 4 paragraphs 2 body, intro, closing.
The prompt I used was #5: A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Give your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.
Thank you so much for any and all help! May GOD'S Blessings be upon you, your family, and your situation forever!