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Please critique my CommonApp essay

Freckles93Freckles93 Registered User Posts: 46 Junior Member
edited December 2010 in College Essays
I just finished my CommonApp personal statement. Before, I had a different essay and a different prompt, but I got sudden inspiration to write this one, and I think it is much better. (It's about the 14 year age difference between me and my sister and it's very personal) Would anybody be willing to help me? I just need some proofreading and overall feedback. Preferably by parents or anyone who isn't applying this year.

Thanks so much, I really appreciate it!
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