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Essay Critique?

KagebanaKagebana Registered User Posts: 12 New Member
edited December 2010 in College Essays
Hey everyone, Happy New Year's Eve. :)

Would anyone be willing to look over my essay and let me know if there's anything to fix? My topic is: Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence. I did it on my best friend who helped me capture my ambition back. If you could, I'd really like the essay back by tomorrow, 9 PM Pacific time latest. Reason being that the application is due Monday and I want to turn it in before and make sure everything goes through alright.

If anybody would be willing to, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks so much!
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