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Critique my Common App Transfer Essay

lacrosse17lacrosse17 Registered User Posts: 5 New Member
edited April 2013 in College Essays
I love to get some feedback and critique on my 'why' transfer essay portion of the common app. I would especially appreciate comment on diction, as well as whether or not the essay includes enough substance as to what exactly makes me want to transfer.

Apparently I dont have enough posts yet to send a pm, so send me one or post your email here and I'll send you an email with the essay.

Thanks in advance!
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Replies to: Critique my Common App Transfer Essay

  • lacrosse17lacrosse17 Registered User Posts: 5 New Member
    Hello again. While I realize my OP was less than 12 hours ago, I am curious as to why my thread has received so many views and yet no replies? Have a committed some sort of faux pas? Or was that this post? haha

    My sentiment is rooted in urgency, as the Common App deadline for my #1 school is in a mere 8 days.
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