Can someone revise my brief essay
Prompt: Indicate a brief personal statement about your objectives and goals
They may forget your name but they will never forget how you made them feel - maya angelou
My education objective consist of acquiring a bachelors degree in nursing.
I always found the human body intriguing. I find it fascinating how a small piece of pill can heal a cold or how the brain stores everything from memories, knowledge, to fears. The thought of having such astounding knowledge about the aspects of the human body has inspired me to become a nurse. Not only that, I prefer nursing over other medical fields because I admire the personal connection between patients and nurses. I enjoy interacting and and helping people through difficult times. They may forget my name the next day but they will never forget how I helped them. It gives me great satisfaction knowing that I made a difference in the lives of people.
After obtaining my degree, I plan to give back to the community by staying on Guam to pursue my career.