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HELP! Death Essay (And Debate), need feedback ASAP

D.Mat1234D.Mat1234 Registered User Posts: 19 Junior Member
edited November 24 in College Essays
Hi All!

I know the grandparent-dying life-changing essay is cliche, but I took a very in-depth approach to explaining how death is important in my essay. I work in a hospital, so I really honed in on how death becomes meaningless, etc.

I was wondering if anyone would mind giving it a read and giving me their feedback? If you private message me, I can have you read it. I am just worried about content.

In addition, I wrote a very analytical debate essay for a college supplement, if you wanted to read that as well that would be very helpful.

Thanks everyone!

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