I know the grandparent-dying life-changing essay is cliche, but I took a very in-depth approach to explaining how death is important in my essay. I work in a hospital, so I really honed in on how death becomes meaningless, etc.
I was wondering if anyone would mind giving it a read and giving me their feedback? If you private message me, I can have you read it. I am just worried about content.
In addition, I wrote a very analytical debate essay for a college supplement, if you wanted to read that as well that would be very helpful.