I recently wrote, 3 letters for an appeals process to my old graduate school. I was dismissed due to academic reasons. It was my final probation, sort of like a 3rd time is strike deal. 1 letter was for my advisor, another for the director of the program and the final letter to the dean of the graduate school. I ddi not appeal at the time of the dismissal because I was so discouraged. But after a year away, I want to finish the program. I am currently taking classes in another field at a different University. I have a job also and managing to keep my grades up. I only need 7 more hours (about 3 classes) with All A's which is doable.
So here is the letter to the advisor. The other two letters are somewhat similar. First and foremost it is a apology letter, but at the same time it is asking for a final chance. Please tell me if it is good or thought. I know it is long but I want it to really be a letter showing I know what was wrong and I am trying to fix myself