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Please Rate My Poem!!!(It's Short)

saynotoharvardsaynotoharvard - Posts: 89 Junior Member
edited March 2011 in Princeton University
♫♫♫
He's comin for the college student
Whether rich or poor
He keeps adding to the monthly tab
Adding more and more

He starts planning his venture
Soon after graduation in May
He knows you fell for his usury
He's your local Sallie Mae

♫♫♫
Post edited by saynotoharvard on

Replies to: Please Rate My Poem!!!(It's Short)

  • QSCXQQQSCXQQ Registered User Posts: 43 Junior Member
    Couple of questions:

    1. Was "coming" deliberately spelled incorrectly?
    2. What does "coming for the college student" mean?

    I think the usage of "adding" twice is a bit redundant.
    And rhyming May with Mae might be a bit weak, but it's alright.
  • saynotoharvardsaynotoharvard - Posts: 89 Junior Member
    lol i didnt intend 4 it to be taken seriously
    i was just mocking the average college student
    guess it turnd out to be a good poem:)
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