Hello, I have my sat tomorrow and would really appreciate it if someone could grade my essay and provide feedback on what to work on, thanks.
Prompt: Is creativity needed more than ever in the world today?
Today the world is rapidly changing. Creativity is dramatically needed as a new boom in technology and science is occurring.
Through the actions of individuals such as Steve Jobs and Mark Zuckerberg, a new boom of technology is occurring. Without creativity. Advancements in this field would halt. Hence no social media or smart phones would exist. Creativity for this field is urgently needed as technology expands. Now people have access to wearable technology and able to connect virtually anything to the internet. Thus with no innovation, technology would stay at a stalemate.
A creative person is also needed for science. Recently NASA launched a program to set up a colony on mars. The creative engineers at NASA have to use their knowledge to develop new ideas of getting a rocket to mars with human life. Just imagine the possibilities leading up to the future.
Overall, creativity is vital for the world today. It has gotten us smartphones, social media and space exploration. When creativity ends, the world will go back to the Stone Age.
Two things I believe I struggle at is coming up and developing ideas.
Thank you to whoever grades and leaves feedback for my essay.