2 ident. sentence error questions..

Ivystriver2
Sun, 11 Jul 2010 00:24:36 +0000

This is the correct thread for SAT questions.

1. “when” is not used properly in the sentence. I believe that’s covered under the whole idiom rule, but I could be wrong.

2. “in the catching of” should be replaced with “to catch.” the original way is just too wordy and unnecessary. There may be another rule to justify this but that’s how I feel.
Anyway, If u just remember the 14ish generalized rules of english, you should have no problem breaking 700. Best of luck. :)