2 ident. sentence error questions..

cheng81894
Sun, 11 Jul 2010 00:06:11 +0000

No one objects to his company, even though he has made insulting remarks about almost every member of the group, when he is a remarkably witty man.


The error here is “group, when”… anyone explain this to me? What kind of rule does this fall under?


The new system, which uses remote cameras in the catching of speeding motorists, may undermine the police department’s authority.


The error here is “in the catching of”… ditto to my comment above.

Thanks for any responses… im looking to crack at least 700 on writing… assuming i can bump my 750 in math to a 800…

btw, im new to this forum, is there a specific thread that answers these kind of questions?