2 Questions on Writing!

Fat_Nerd
Thu, 13 Oct 2011 11:16:06 +0000

1) In either Europe or America / Either in Europe or in America. Parallelism.

2) “More than” is used to describe two things. What is more than describing here? Very ambiguous, and not actually describing two things at all. Therefore, we’ll change this structure to “Kelly is proud of her own abilities to mediate disputes more than she is proud of any of her other strengths.”